Cool beat

Another cool beat here I love the "DEEP" sounds you have pushed forward here and that backround sound is pretty impressive aswell, This one was a tad long but Thats ok it has some good sounds and kind of unique sounding so nice and fantastic piece here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe a bit shorter.

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nice

for a first song its really good, and I saw the movie Stay Alive, it was a cool movie about this computer game that kills you how you die in it, lol, ^_^ even though this has nothing to do w/ the movie lol

Nice

First song ever? Hehe, you must have spent a whole lot of time experimenting then. Sounds great. I saw a movie called stay alice, reat stuff, but I doubt that has anything to do with this? Anyhow, keep up the good work!

-cd-

BULLSHIT

THIS CAN NOT BE YOUR FIRST SONG EVER
THIS IS THE SHIT