Now this one reminds me of the NeverPutt intro menu. XD Always something similar huh.
I love the uplifting, dance-like vibe here, with an interesting contrast/complement with the sharper string-like layer you had in the other one... in the end though, when that layer fades away after the two minute mark it feels you suddenly relax a bit. Guess it maybe adds in a sense of tension that's maybe not ideal for a main menu theme with a possibly brighter mood meant for it?
Conclusively: interesting but maybe not ideal contrast atmosphere-wise. Otherwise really rich in sound; plenty of air and layers and feelgood vibe.
Bits of potential musical conflict critique aside these are really great.
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