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FVIII ~ Wonder

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This is my first track! I called it "Wonder", inspired from "Saunter", first track of my first album, "Dreams".


The art was made by my good friend Cyborg Ninja, and thanks to @Creepycat18 for the support!!


I hope you like it!

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Very very H

FVIII responds:

aitch

A lot of great melodic ideas here. Congratulations on your first song on NG. It's missing a bassline, and you could definitely make use of a more conventional structure. The intro feels as naked as an outro, and by 2:03, I feel like we've been in either a build or an intro for a very long time, especially by 2:30.

Without a bassline, 2:41 doesn't hit as hard as it should. That said with those small fixes this would be a pretty nice little track. Great work, and a fantastic start.

Keep it up! Let me know if you want any help resources or tips or tricks :)

FVIII responds:

thanks for the feedback! I made this track a couple months ago and I had much less experience with music-making at that time! I have a bunch of other tracks coming, but they still need a lot of fixing. I'll make sure to add a baseline next time :)

ok why is this 2.48? it should be way more

FVIII responds:

lol agree

Cool! I like that!

FVIII responds:

thx!

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Score
3.25 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 26, 2021
8:20 PM EST
Genre
House
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5.2 MB
3 min 50 sec
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