Great start

~~REVIEW~~
Now this was pretty interesting of a track, the start of this really seemed alot better then the ladder end of things only because the second part of this piece seemed off as the sounds were not original or something, dont get me wrong i love "GUITAR" stuff it just sounded differant of that then normal, Now as the starting of this it was pretty good, has a good "UPBEAT" feel and it had me going up untill that second part, so these are things you could possibly fix and possibly even make better, and i do look forward to any changes and or new versions, or even improvments on newer stuff as this is an older piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try and pick up the second part and have it not feel so off maybe its the guitar or other sounds but is off.

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Good!

I like the beginning. :) Great way to start things off, the guitar after that is a nice addition as well, but it sounds a bit fake. All the effects after that are a nice addition, keep up the good work!

-cd-

well

it was good for your second when things stop you can really telll some of you sounds need a little work cause they sound just aliitle off and dont fit toghther perfectly the whale thing just dosnt flow excelently but really its alot of little stuff that you can fix with just alittle extra work