Really nice

This was a nice tune very pleasent and keeps flowing well with some nice sounds, I do think this could use some build-up meaning since you have some soft points you could have it slowly build up to a slightly more intense sound but it all depends on your style anyways that was my suggestion for the day.

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As suggested above some build up was a nice idea that could make this a tad bit better.

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awesome.

I loved this! I hope it's ok if I use it in a future flash. Dun worry, I'll give you credit :)

It's OK

Well it's a good start, but it could get better. It does have that slow and sad feeling that fits perfectly, but it still sounds like it's missing something - don't know what exactly. Well, keep up the good work!

-cd-