Really nice
This was a nice tune very pleasent and keeps flowing well with some nice sounds, I do think this could use some build-up meaning since you have some soft points you could have it slowly build up to a slightly more intense sound but it all depends on your style anyways that was my suggestion for the day.
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As suggested above some build up was a nice idea that could make this a tad bit better.
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