FINALLY SOME GOOD MIDTEMPO ON NEWGROUNDS!! :D
My one critique on this song is that there seems to be some competition in the high frequency range. I think a mixture of the reverb on the bass line as well as some heavy distortion is cluttering up those high frequencies, and kinda muffles your snare and kick a bit (They could be punching through the mix a bit more).
This is more of a preference but the ending seems a bit rushed. Something a little more dramatic could really tie this song together super nicely.
Not sure if you have heard of midtempo artists like Rezz, Deathpact, and 1788-L, but listen to where everything stands in the mix with those artists. Rezz and 1788-L especially have great control over those higher frequencies.
All that being said, this song definitely got you a new follower. Looking forward to hearing more from you :)