Good, but you say "your" instead of "you are" or "you're". This is very petty but welcome to the real world.

Nice job on this, it's very bouncy and definitely reminds me of house! It's also pretty catchy, which gives a little bit of that calliope feeling. The progression you have is very interesting and definitely very well done. However my only criticism is sometimes certain parts of the song sound a bit too loud or bass boosted, and it gets a bit too repetitive. But otherwise great work, I hope to see more from you!