This is some cool experimental stuff haha. The bass drum is OK in the context of experimental methinks...but as pitbulljones said, it does lack some of the low range punch you'd expect. Up to you really.

I like this again. It's a proper tune. It has the same issue as previous regarding dynamic range. It's not clipping or anything it's just all up front. That bass kick, it's booming in low mid rather than bass range.

I love the use of verb, the slow arp'd hat/filter. Your sound choice, panning, eq, it's all there. It's the volume, that is it. I'd switch your kick, something drier with a small room verb.

A single note bass line on the beat would add some glue.

nice work

pbj

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