Ayyy it's pretty lit! Especially 40 sec part.
Feedback(i guess..): some note sounds off scale. Sometimes it can spice up your music, but most of the time it makes the music a bit awkward. You use them quite often in your tracks. Although it might be intended, I suggest reducing them a bit. It'll make your track a little bit 'focused'.
Speaking of focus, while the track was pretty fun to listen to, it kinda lacks main theme; that is, the whole track sounds like an infinitely long buildup. Dunno what to do with it... maybe try to stick with some "core" melody instead of thinking new melodies for each bar. In other words, try being a bit repetitive(in a good way of course! lol). Being (appropriately) repetitve helps people to remember your song easily.
Author Comments
out with a new song! this ones really good because i put a lot of effort into it therefore it must be good. hopefully you have as much fun listening to it as i did making it (that being a little bit but not too much because too much would be bad)
quick note, the audio mixing is not perfect, sorry if the audio mixing is bad, this is one of my first tracks that ive tried to do an "advanced" mixing job (which just means i tried panning some stuff) and i think it sounds good in some places while sounding bad in others
additional instruments used are from: warioware twisted (gba), rhythm heaven (ds), and wii music (wii, of course)
all rights to these instrument samples go to nintendo. ng pls dont get mad at me these instruments only take up about half the instruments used in this song and i wrote all the melodies, chords, and drum loops by myself using my own brain okay thx bye
original creation date - 2/6/2021
thanks for the review! this track was kind of rushed, but i understand most of the problems listed here. the reason why it seems like a long buildup is because it's based off of a chord progression that i made a while back, and i didnt really know of much to do with it but i thought it sounded good enough to use in a song. the entire track was made in around the span of 5 hours, so i didnt really put that much effort into the structuring of it, as evidenced by the random shifts in melody and semi-abrupt end section. i had a decent amount of fun making this, even though i wouldnt really consider it my best track. i'll try to make some effort to improve on some of the things you mentioned in the future, but i can't guarantee for sure.
Credits & Info
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- 306
- Downloads
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- Score
- Waiting for 2 more votes
- Uploaded
- Feb 6, 2021
- 7:30 PM EST
- Genre
- Video Game
- File Info
- Song
- 5.6 MB
- 2 min 28 sec
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