Either this Universe's God is ultra spooky, or this Arch-Fiend fellow is very sadistic and unscrupulous.
Chilling stuff dude! I'd say that the piece as a whole works, but the foreground elements are just a little bit squiggly and loose compared to other elements that were shaded a bit more carefully.
Understandable of course, working with felts and wanting to get the piece out. Been there myself tons of times working on art projects. That said, sometimes a tiny bit of extra time can make a noticeable difference in quality.
Either, keep up the stellar work! :D