Busy and lively but lacking proportion and definition.
Look out Tower (Boat)
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This is a boat Idea I had I got it from this one restaurant that rotates the room at a high top floor But this tower is meant for the sea!
RedeyestheSecound responds:
Yes I kinda rushed this one its less about the detail and more about the idea though cause I think it would be cool to have this kind of boat ! this is only my first boat art work so it should get better later like my other remakes like the grandfather clock I redrew
Cute! The lookout tower on the boat seems a bit out-of-scale, and in general I think the piece could use a bit more detail. I think the most well-articulated part of the piece is the satellite dishes on top of the ship, but otherwise some of the background details are a bit awkward. For example, the lightning bolt on the left seems to be coming from the side as opposed to out of the sky, and in the ocean there's a wave that seems to dip down beneath the boat, apparently oriented opposite the rest of them. Still, it's a charming piece. I like the coloring on the boat too with the different shades of gray. Keep at it, man!
RedeyestheSecound responds:
Thanks for the review and your right on the lightning bolt from the right side but I was trying to show the lighting was curving inward
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