Well this was interesting
I like the "TITLE" and I like the "EYES" but like in one of your other pieces you need more shading and effects and more detail all around even the font could be more fancy but these are all just ideas and opinions you do have a nice effort of drawing and wording here.
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like in one of your other pieces you need more shading and effects and more detail all around even the font could be more fancy
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