This is a beautiful piece you have here

A very good visual here I think it does need a few more things like some ships maybe some flying birds some more waves a few more lights just a few more things that could spice this up a tad besides that this was pretty cool

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few more props and such

~X~

A misty morning in a time past our time... civilization crumbles beyond the natural new, and in the background... three suns? I love the motive. Imaginative, dreamy, dystopian but hopeful all at once... really nice piece. The grayscale tone works well here too.

-cd-

i remember this

that was a fun academy

a little simplistic, but...

I think you've got the feeling of 'exit music' down well. It's not the image I first think of, but the mist and subterfugal quality (subterfugal=subterfuge, just in case) really are evocative of the emotions in the song. Great job!!