You're starting to have quite the cast now. This guy looks like vilain material to me. He looks really good.
P.S. if you ever want some help with story telling, I can help you flesh things out and give you decent feedback so that you can make more sense for yourself on how you want it told. Just let me know in PM and we can figure something out.
Cindy's actually a she. I just pulled her hair back, I tried to give her a subtle hero theme.(but that didn't work ^^; )
I've had this character in my galleries for years now, I just haven't been doing a good job at drawing her often/
As for feedback, I would definitely consider that. I plan to be posting bits and pieces of the story of Deviantart whenever I get the chance.
The comic I made about my squirrel character, for example was just a small glimpse of her history. She's also in the same story as my character, Cindy here. :)
Just make sure there is no contradictions in ya story, also make characters who are distinct in characteristics/traits/views(not two people who look different but act exactly the same). You can make it work(though I don't know you). Great pic, cool character.
Thanks. I know the feeling. those types of points haunt me in story telling when I watch a movie or show.