[C] G1v2


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Version 2 of a character from a visual novel~ Style is a bit different sadly so i'm not sure how that will work with a VN ;n;


Sorry i have not checked newgrounds in awhile so i couldn't give you're art a review but anyway it looks really good only my only complaint is the arms are not long enough and i hope you keep making art and proceed to get better at it!

She's cute, the coloring is, obviously, awesome, and I love the family... but the arms ARE a bit short, not just for the dress. I'd love a VN with your art tho- I'm gonna wait patiently.

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holikrep responds:

Ahh that's very kind of you to say! Thank you so much ;u; and yeah I agree ;; sadly I didn't see it til now ! Thank you both for pointing it out~ I will probably attempt to fix/adjust it later today! I appreciate the kind words ; u ; i'm flattered you'd say so~ Hopefully one of these days i'll manage to ask what the VN's name is even!

welp i missed the stream, now i feel bad.

but yeah, i'm not sure how it'd work for a vn, but without considering that, i too think this is better than the first drawing, and it's also good to see you got back in shape.
the only thing is maybe the arms are too short, but it could just be an optical illusion given from the clothes... i'm not sure really, but this is very good anyway compared to the last ones of this period and i like the face more than the first version.

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holikrep responds:

Aww what noo don't feel bad~ It was fairly short and uneventful anyway! I was just coloring mostly~ so it was basically zoomed in most the time ! Oh nooo I'll probably try and adjust the arm length then~ During sketching phase it looked fine/unnoticeable to me at least but yeah I definitely am seeing the shortness now

It's good! I think i like this better than first version

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holikrep responds:

I showed a friend and his response was similar! I'm glad you both lean towards this one~ I feel like i'm still partial to the other one though quq )9

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4.17 / 5.00

Apr 1, 2017
5:36 AM EDT
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1414 x 2000 px
727.2 KB

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