No no no, this simply won't do. For something that's said to represent the Milky Way, it doesn't look anything like it. Did you even take Astronomy in school? No, seriously, I want to know. If you did, you would know just how off you are with the colors of it on this one. The perspective with the poses and the horizon is off, and on top of that, the horses' fur/hair are extremely undetailed, with the only positive being that they have different poses. The background trees and fireflies, however, nail the coffin to this picture; there's shorthand drawing and then there's just plain laziness. Learn the difference and try to improve next time.