I found this to be much better than the other submission. Maybe it's because I am more used to your style by now. Well, it's just two submissions. With all the stuff I review, I just used to these things easily. I really the author comments. I am starting to understand this story more.
Well, maybe it's just meant to be an insightful poem. This guy looks like some fox. I was just reading "Naruto Gaiden" today. He definitely seems to be controlling fire. Yet another thing associated with the fox legend!