Decent

The feet throw me off...weird pose for them. I don't understand why nudity was put into this picture [unless you're using it for higher ratings]. I personally it's pointless but you do show obvious skill. Good work.

Drunk Test

Cop: I don't give a damn if u can't walk in a straight line or if ur about 2 bust ur ass, ur hot and topless, u officially pass.

Chick: STFU u s2pid ... **thud**

duude

thats sweet, u got skill man those toes look like they took a while to do tho. nice painting, n is it just me or does that chick look REALY hammered XP. by the way, nice boobs ^^

mgh

You're pretty good with tits. My main suggestion is to study them from different angles (Profile, forntways, etc) Instead of just the same 3/4ths view..

My biggest gripe is most certainly her hip-to-leg area. The largest part of the female lower torso is almost always the hips, and no matter how muscular or round the legs are. In fact, a good guide for drawing women is to either match Shoulder/chest area size with hips, or make the hips BIGGER (to emphasize on the womb)

If you look closely, the largest part of your drawing is her thighs, while her rear looks just about as thin as her hip/waist

Thing #2: It's obvious you were going for a bit of an awkward movement here (Though some know-it-alls below me don't quite understand that!)

A big big tip to help improve this drawing is to look at the line of action, much like in an animation. If you were to draw a line through this figure, it would be closer to a straight line" | " than you probably intended-- making her look a bit stiff. The solution's nothing more than curving her structure to a more "C" shape.

Erm, just some dumb suggestions. I feel like an asshole telling you how to draw, this really is a great drawing you have here.

<3

I love this drawling, and not just because she's hot, its very well done, and I think what you did with her legs are cute, cuz iv'e seen girls do that when they turn around