pacing
I don't in anyway represent a lot of viewers preferences, and I never claim to . But I have my own personal pet peeves. Pacing....you need to pace your cartoon. I turned off near the beginning because it dragged. Still I'm not claiming that my opinion is the be all end all, cause its not. I just assume that maybe you'll take it to heart. The long explaination is cause everytime I give a bad review, some people reply in cocky ways. I'd like to think the reviews are helpful
take care.
sorry for your lack of attention span.There was plenty of action and the pacing was alright to me.Not my fault you cant sit still long enough.
Nice graphics....
You could tell that you spent a lot of time and effort on this, but as the guy before me said and my friend just said "Resident Evil" ripoff, but I don't think its that bad. The one thing is that you spend all this time and effort on something so violent. Why not something peaceful and serene? or something funny? Okay, so maybe I AM a pacifist :), but come on, I can only watch so many things die and so much blood flying. Dude, your great flash animator, just find someone else to figure out what your animating. NO OFFENSE THE ACTUAL ANIMATION IS GREAT! different plot and subject line would be nice. peace and happiness, stay groovy -kevin
YOu are right! so right! for part 5, i will take out all the blood, and the zombies will only want to hug and kiss people! OH! and since it has zombies, and some sort of virus, and the badguys are terrorists, IT MUST BE RESIDENT EVIL!BECAUSE RESIDENT EVIL was the very first thing in the whole wide world to come up with zombies, and some sort of virus that causes it! OH TEH NO! OMG! ok your sooo right man, I'm so glad you told this to me! For part 5 Ill also change the title to Resident evil 5: Lost in space, since its in the future on a different planet and all!THanks man! PEACE!
ok - just!
i wasnt too impressed really. you have obviously worked hard on the graphics but the sound is crap (his shouting is just annoying) and you fail when it comes to trying to set the scene at the start! why does it take ages to ill the first zombie and like 2 seconds to kill the rest??? would be better if you got straight to the point or built up the atmosphere more efficiently and improved the sound!
Ugh...
Watching, waiting for it to get better. Overused sound effects. Hate how zombies wait for 1 zombie to die, then they come in. Needs more mobbing. Main char doesn't act fast enough and he seems kinda stupid. Get a frikin' microphone. They are $30 at Best Buy!!!
a little better but
The animation and graphics were better, the voice acting was ok for a first try. I'm not going to say copy, but I will say I saw some homages to Dawn of the Dead, Resident Evil, and Final Fantasy Spirits within. Still it feels like it's violence for the sake of violence and no real purpose. Guy fighting for his life, escapes and fights dead friend (like everybody zombie movie ever made Ex: Resident Evil, Dawn of the dead (original), Night of the Living Dead (newer version), and the list can go on.) Now there's no need to be a prick because constructive criticism only makes future movies stronger. If there's going to be gore and violence make it effective, yeah he cuts the shit out of one zombie but the rest hold back until he's done. In movie two the rip the shit out of Clemmens...the entire movie, mean while we don't know what's going on with the main hero who's miraculously ok until the zombies are done with Clemmens. I think this series is ok, because all zombie movies are the same in the end and for what it is, it's ok. If the effectivness of the violence can be properly applied (Like in 28 Days later) it'll at least stand up to some of the better zombie movies. Romero had atmosphere in Dawn of the Dead and the violence was such, that by the end of the movie the audience was numb to the violence, and realized the zombies were empty shells of hte people they once were. Good luck on future submissions because it's getting there, the skills just need to be applied more effectivly.