pacing
I don't in anyway represent a lot of viewers preferences, and I never claim to . But I have my own personal pet peeves. Pacing....you need to pace your cartoon. I turned off near the beginning because it dragged. Still I'm not claiming that my opinion is the be all end all, cause its not. I just assume that maybe you'll take it to heart. The long explaination is cause everytime I give a bad review, some people reply in cocky ways. I'd like to think the reviews are helpful
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