Short Circuit
It looks like Johnny 5.
Reviews for "Demonic P-Bot"
P-Bot Orgy.
Colorfully detailed and definitely a piece of professional work. It's a total shame the story may never be finished.
The story seems a bit convoluted.
Almost to the point where I feel a large majority of audiences might dismiss the idea.
That is unless there's nothing really deep about Tom's explanation, just that it sounds absurd.
It's all in the presentation and acting.
When I saw this...my first impression was a Virus somehow invaded P-Bot's circuitry through spam of the portal, causing him to disembowel himself (in a way only robots can), and essentially turning him into a Zombie-Bot.
It almost seems more "fearful" if his goggles suddenly lit up and his eyes open up and turned into jaws.
BUT....that's just my interpretation.
As it is right now...it doesn't strike fear as the familiarity of P-Bot's face still retains his innocence.
Try having his "goggles" become his eyes, and his face somehow rips open and forms MASSIVE TEETH!
MindChamber responds:
Ok. well the reason Pbots face remained intact is to have some sort of semblance to the original character. Its supposed to be creepy granted but its also supposed to be funny. If a demonic mickey Mouse toy was chasing you down a hallway, it wouldn't be nearly as ridiculous if Mikey himself wasn't somewhat identifiable. as for the story being convoluted. I disagree. It has a plot device and setup for the action. and that's it. that's all you really need for a horror or action movie. I would agree it being convoluted if say I began with a back story of the Key, or why Tom has it, or how he figured out how to use it as a power source.
the fact that Tom states he is using a demonic entity as an alternative power source should be enough for you to conclude that this is an absurd story.
Oh my God...
It seems like that P-bot is ACTUALLY there...
Ohmigosh, I just... Damn...
Oh God.
MindChamber responds:
Thanks
AWESO!
P-bot is aweso!
Good job on modeling
How long did rendering take?