may I ask....
how much free time do you have on your hands to make all this? I mean, seriously, where do you find the time to do this at the office?
anyway, the art is good, I have to admit. You're a master at these kind of sculptures.
Reviews for "Demonic P-Bot"
MindChamber responds:
i did this on my free time
fucion
in a way, it looks like a fucion beatween you (MindChamber's robot) and the real P-bot.
Modeling, Materials/textures, Lights and Render is almost perfect, there is one single detail I didn't like, as the walls are althought red, it gets lost in the background (it would need some more contrast).
cool
he doesn't look that demonic, but i wouldn't wanna be near him.
Love the 3D work; but comments on the story
I know what you've given is a brief summary, but having Tom blatantly suggest that the key is incredibly evil and could transfer to P-Bot is a little sudden and hard to believe. If I were the intern, my first thoughts would be "he's joking". Playing off of that, rather than him "forgetting", having him purposely leave the key in could lead to a stronger climax as he tries to deal with the consequence of not removing the key. If you'd want to make the short film a longer short film, having Tom reluctant to say what the power source is and making the intern find out why he has to remove the key would add a lot to the story.
As far as the design, he definitely looks creepy: with a hint of an ancient feel, as in an old dark feel, which is great when you're talking about evil and artifacts (the key). Is this how PBot will look through out the entire short film, or will he look like his cheerful self in the beginning, and start to look more like this character you're showing us now? Other than that stuff, the image is great. I'd love to see a clip of it in motion sometime. If you ever need someone to play the part of the intern, I'd love to give it a shot; haha
MindChamber responds:
haha, well the intern doesn't take him seriously, like he forgets, but figures its a gag anyway. Until he sees lil pbot peeking around from corners etc.. And if you know Tom, its completely believable that he would come up with a reason that's as left field as this one. There's alot i left out in the description as I didnt want to bog down the spot with too much writing.
If you've ever seen "Be Kind. Rewind" Directed by Micheal Gondry, you will see where I was heading at. Jack Black is demagnetizing VCR tapes with his body after being electrocuted. haha cant get any more Blatant than that. I do agree, the intern being alil devious and testing out the key theory might be alil more fun in the end.
Hot damn.
That is jizztastic. I really think you should get a few of your buddies, and create this masterful film! It would be amazing, as it has a great plot, would have nice animation and effects, and it's Newgrounds obviously!