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Reviews for "Welcome To New York"

can be reworked

The music was a good choic but some things come off as kind of odd, for one the first scene that shows the bridge it looks like see buildings on one side the underisde of the bridge and then water as tall as the building, whether you were trying to make that an above veiw of the bridge or what I don't know but it didn't looke right. I really like the water effects. the Ferris Wheel can be done alot more smoothly, what you do is make the ferris wheel a graphic but take the cars off of it, then mark it on the ferris wheel where the cars supposed to be, then make the ferris wheel rotate using a motion tween (they tell how to rotate in the motion tween tutorial) then make the cars separate graphics, you might need to use a lot of keyframes to do this, but make sure you're one layer higher then the ferris wheel then put the car on the spots where you marked then move the animation foward a few frames to see where the spot is move the car to that spot with a motion tween. repeat as neccesary

HellScorpion responds:

Umm...I think I know what you mean, thanks. Oh yea, and I was trying to make a view of below the bridge...

A truly bill effort

Now: This has potential.

Truly impressive in serval speciffic ways which are personal to me. As a pretty pathetic 15 yrold flash animator I was impressed.
FOR INSTANCE: The loading screen, how the heck do you put those on?
THE MUSIC: Put on and together well
IDEAS: Good, flowing

My fo-pas: Drawings are deaf to the sound of art. Now this may be your style but it was not apropriate to your subject.
IDEAS: Not expanded on, could have been richer.

You are truly billiant for a 14 yrold animator - I look up to you.

However it lacks something.

I would very much like to work with you on a joint project - Fell free to respond to this: fritolampoon@hotmail.com

Thanks
James

HellScorpion responds:

Thank you so much! Your review means a lot to me. Well, a joint project is a very good opportunity to put together our skills...but I did this on my Spring Break and it'll be over very soon. I don't think I will have time, but when I do, I'll email you.

And another thing, I'm only using the Flash Trial...i only have about 3 weeks left on it.

As a new yorker

I know that not everyone loves new york, but that shouldn't be a reason to put this down. It's not the best, but keep practicing.
PS: New york is the best place on earth. Let no one tell you otherwise.

Not bad

I think you have good potential as a flash artist. The concept and choice of music were very good, though the graphics were quite simple. I'd say, work on that. Practice makes perfect.

HellScorpion responds:

Thanks, but I think I'm going to take a break from Flash... it seems like my effort isn't really paying off..

heh it was to slow 4 me to finish viewing

so i just graded on the parts i saw and well it wasnt that great u could have done better and iv lived in new york all my life aswell.