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Reviews for "Fury - Preview"

Nice

It seems very obvious that the movie consists of a very strong theme of DBZ, in fact, it'd be exactly like DBZ straight from the cartoons without hair. Although the animation is extremely well done, and I know for sure you've put in lots of time into it, it just doesn't appeal to me anymore - the whole DBZ theme. But again, very nice job with the animation. What I thought to be ironic is that a demon would be restoring life to those who deserve it, and the world. That's a pretty good twist

AkiraToriyamaJR responds:

thanks for voting and thanks i have alota twist in my movie. ok remember that guy at the end of the movie wit blond hair and cloths. i wanted people to be in sspense but forget, its ryo ( black guy ) thats the body he going to get inside of to fight kanon. i was gonna use to styles of animation. DBZ style animation and typical animation. Glossy eyes and hair and the power ups with alotta camera angels. And they wer gonna have hair in part 3 but i dont no if im gonna finish it now but anyway thanks for your vote.

wtf?!?!?!?!

dood you gotta get dbz outta ur brain!

AkiraToriyamaJR responds:

You can say what the fuck you know but anyway Homes, ive been watching the dragon ball z series since i was 5yrs old. ive seen every movie, every episode, etc. I know what its about and what akira changed about it. your not giving advice or anywathing, your basically taking about nothing. come on, if you mean does this have to do with DBZ then know. the art/animation style is the only thing im using right now. I wish you guys would write longer like the previous reviewers and explain what you dont understand or like cause this is a waste of space.

Hmmm there are a few problems

1: it looked like no one had any clothing on, I mean some people might not be offended when they see a couple of naked guys go at it, however I am sure most of us will. So get them some clothing.

2: Ryo should be a black Sangiyan, a dark skinned Tien. Like Popo is a black Genie, Ryu should be a black Sangiyan, cause that would be cool, I am just saying since this is DBZ based you should have some DBZ based races, like the Sangiyans.

3: Kash should be an ogre or oni or what ever you wanna consider them and have horns just like them aswell, you can keep with the same hair and face, just put some cloths on him and give him the horns that you see these beings having.

4: Kanon should look like a Shintenma, (Shintenma's are those creatures you will see in the Bojacks movie, movie #9, actually Bojacks is a shintenma, a demon closely related to elves and Kaioshin, cause of their ears, and the fact they have hair and are not reptiles or whatever the namekians are). So I would give Kanon long Orange hair like Bojacks or short like Bido.

Other than this and the fact you still need girls in any anime, unless you want people making gay comics and pictures about it, so do make some girls, cause I don't think you want some gayass making a yaio picture of Kanon and Ryo as a couple, cause thats what these guys do, I mean come on this one guy made a gay comic of Vegeta getting a blow job by Krillin. Think about it!!! Have some girls as major characters in the anime, yet keep the three still as the main factor.

Other than this your anime looks flawless, I know you wanna make it all or nearly all about action, but you need some progression, something to keep people minds' "straight".

AkiraToriyamaJR responds:

Sorry it took 2 years to respond.

1. Their dead and this is Newgrounds. If you saw the first fury i did they were sticks. Then i started to draw them out in the second version which is after the first version. They like people to be original. I didnt want to draw them out completly and say their dead because then that would be to much like dragon ball z. They will posse living souls until they find their bodys. That was part of it so consider these bodies their souls.

2. The only thing im really using from akira ( not dbz akira toriyama)is his style of artwork and animation. Some scenes i did borrow from dbz, but thats to get better adjusted and to come with some new ideas.

3. Kash is a demon, and a very powerful one. His history wasnt really put in the preview but he is the first to fight kanon in the movie. If you seen the ending of Maximum Chakra their is a guy with dark yellow eyes and a ponytail. Thats kash redone. Ive redon him the most and gave him a dark, deep history.

4. This is a villan like no other. Kanon will not smile, laugh, cry, or put effort for a power up. Ive remade him into a lifeless soul. There are some major twist ive added and you all will be surprised. I thank you for your advice and review, but for this movie, i got it under control. Their all still dead, kash being the only demon right now was granted some things other dead souls arent. Dragon Ball V though is something im making after Maximum Chakra so for that id like to hear more about your ideas and the races so i get it accurate. But leave Fury to me guys.

wow

no1 has reviewed this since july, okay, umm, to start, id say there was too many , way too many stolen ideas from dragonballz, a lot. the flying, energy blasts, even some of the moves were very similar.the storyline was good but it reminded me a lil of yu yu hakusho.
on the + side, graphics were absolutly amazing, blkown away i was. it all ran very smoothly.the music was pretty kool for me never hearing of it b4.well im off to watch ur other work.

AkiraToriyamaJR responds:

I dont blame anyone on here, I havent been active on here like i was when i was in school. All the time i had when i was younger i dont have no more. But lets straighten this out first.
I understand where your coiming from but flyinf is something everyone from the east and west use. DBZ wasnt the only one. The started to use it cause akira got tired of drawing cars and airplanes. Energy is some all animes have. But how you use it, thats different. If i had ryo form a Kamehameha then thats stealing. But he never shot one. Only kanon. The story is actually mine, but it isnt really revised. I came up with it the day i finshed the preview.
Ive already redone the story but the movie crashed. So im almost done with Maximum Chakra 2. Fury will be back dont worry and ill make sure to have my ideas only lol. Thanks alot

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Really, why waste your time reveiwing this movie for your reveiw is just stupid
Why you ask?
1) preview, aka demo, not allt eh way done
2) your preview time is more pointless than you wasting your time watching this movie

i found it ok, could be better though

AkiraToriyamaJR responds:

a preview is not a movie. Its something to show what you can actually do. So when the full movie comes out, people will say oo i remember him he made this or that. i cant understand you. what do you mean "your preview time is more pointless." i took time and effort to make this. Everyone on NG complains about style and originality so i had to make their dead stages differnt. dont down size me homes. everything needs time. I improved from my previous movie no matter what anyone says. Like i sadi to the otehr guy, since it was a waste dont watch the full version coming out in 2 months. cause then you would waste my time asking questions i explained, etc. Instead of you guys asking stupid or non helpful questions ask about the movie. Why is this like this or whos that. you stating stuff you dont know about like preview not all the way done but forget it. ok, thanks for the review