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[ComfortablyNumb]

Great Story. Great Animation.

You are a great story teller. Most flash movies that have in depth story I do not really get into. Yours got my attention right away. You are also a great artist. The animations was excellent, and I can see that you are truly a Toriyama fan. I do have some suggestions though. I would really like to see more shape in the face. I love the facial expressions. I too love to draw in Akira Toriyama style of DBZ. I mostly do facial expressions. I have a hard time with the face shape. I think you could do this very well. It would look so much better then that round shape. Please consider it. I would also suggest you add clothing and skin tone to the characters. I think that would add a real realitist quality to them. It would take more time to animate, however I think it would add a lot more visual appeal also. I can not wait to see the full version, and I hope it is released soon. Very Impressive.

AkiraToriyamaJR responds:

thanks alot. i have alotta facial expressions in the full movie. i didnt want to put to much of the movie in. i used the circles because they used to be stick figures and i changed that. i think im gonna submit my fist to movies so every 1 can see wat it looked like. when they get back into their bodys, im gonna change their style to typical anime. i was only usn the DBZ style for their dead stages

[BeefyBoy]

Nice

It seems very obvious that the movie consists of a very strong theme of DBZ, in fact, it'd be exactly like DBZ straight from the cartoons without hair. Although the animation is extremely well done, and I know for sure you've put in lots of time into it, it just doesn't appeal to me anymore - the whole DBZ theme. But again, very nice job with the animation. What I thought to be ironic is that a demon would be restoring life to those who deserve it, and the world. That's a pretty good twist

AkiraToriyamaJR responds:

thanks for voting and thanks i have alota twist in my movie. ok remember that guy at the end of the movie wit blond hair and cloths. i wanted people to be in sspense but forget, its ryo ( black guy ) thats the body he going to get inside of to fight kanon. i was gonna use to styles of animation. DBZ style animation and typical animation. Glossy eyes and hair and the power ups with alotta camera angels. And they wer gonna have hair in part 3 but i dont no if im gonna finish it now but anyway thanks for your vote.

[GraEm3]

bla bla bla bla bla bla ,

did you need to have so much writing at the start , apart from that and it being a bit too dbz it was a really good cartoon , but in some parts the frame size was a bit out , the animation was fluid in most parts , but i always get a bit snide with my votes when i find out the artist is a 17 year old dbz fan , there really is no excuse for that ,IM NOT SAYING THIS FLASH IS BAD THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST ANMINE STYLE FLASH CARTOONS IV EVER SEEN but I have to dissagre when you say dbz doesnt suck , and that the story is good , what have you learnd from dbz , have you evrer seen a real persons hair turn blonde when they loose thier temper? have you ever seen some one with a monkey tail? have you ever seen some one "power up"? I'll let you answer.
you would have got a 5 but i dont like the way you say you have finished the movie , why not just submit the whole thing?
-GraEm3

AkiraToriyamaJR responds:

thanks for voting but always remember your never to old to be a fan of anythng. ok to answer your quetions. 1.i think people dont realize what akira did. if u ever watched a typical anime, the bad guy is mean. but oku is like a child with a good heart. thats why i like dbz, not s much glossy eyes hair n detailed scenary. 2.ive learned alot of tricks in animating. how to make something look like its going fast. 3.when you asked the 3 questions to me, ask yourself have you eve seen a person die from wathcing a tape ( the ring ) have you ever head of a fifth element power ( the fifth element ) do you see walkng and talking animals ( cartoons and space jam ) Think about it. its just a cartoon ,fictional, and you make it like it has to be real. thats the beauty of animations. make your imagination come tru. Last,my move is 43.5MB thats way over the limit because of sounds and music. i wont trim them because it makes the movie whack. i am done with it but im taking a break now. hope i answered your questions

[TomokoSasaki]

hm

hm, it was ok, stream the music next time!

the animation was good, but in some places not smooth! what happend?

AkiraToriyamaJR responds:

thanks for voting. i didnt stream it because i had 4 scenes right.the loader, intro readin, scene 1,2 n 3. i did them allin different scenes and could put them in one scene because it froze all the time. soi did event only caus it played through all the scenes. for the animation, some parts are old and some are new. i redid alota scenes so it would all look good. like when he jumped off the rock. thanks for voting

[XwaynecoltX]

((( AWSOME )))

Well you called and i came to check out the rest, and btw thaks for the decent reply, Well here we go, it was a large file size but from the auality put into it i can understand, Cool the graphics is intence, i just wish i knew how to animate like that, it was a preview, and showed what a preview should show. which is bits here and there of different things that will happen in the full ver of the movie, great artwork even though im not a fan of the DBZ stuff, love the detail and the backrounds, backrounds are what i look for in the movies that i review, great job...

MOVIE COMMENTARY: Intence graphics, one power punch of a preview...

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