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Reviews for "Fury - Preview"

wow

no1 has reviewed this since july, okay, umm, to start, id say there was too many , way too many stolen ideas from dragonballz, a lot. the flying, energy blasts, even some of the moves were very similar.the storyline was good but it reminded me a lil of yu yu hakusho.
on the + side, graphics were absolutly amazing, blkown away i was. it all ran very smoothly.the music was pretty kool for me never hearing of it b4.well im off to watch ur other work.

AkiraToriyamaJR responds:

I dont blame anyone on here, I havent been active on here like i was when i was in school. All the time i had when i was younger i dont have no more. But lets straighten this out first.
I understand where your coiming from but flyinf is something everyone from the east and west use. DBZ wasnt the only one. The started to use it cause akira got tired of drawing cars and airplanes. Energy is some all animes have. But how you use it, thats different. If i had ryo form a Kamehameha then thats stealing. But he never shot one. Only kanon. The story is actually mine, but it isnt really revised. I came up with it the day i finshed the preview.
Ive already redone the story but the movie crashed. So im almost done with Maximum Chakra 2. Fury will be back dont worry and ill make sure to have my ideas only lol. Thanks alot

Damn great!!

Awesome! everything is awesome!!
Graphics, animation, style, music...!!
Well done and i cant wait for it :))

Hmmm there are a few problems

1: it looked like no one had any clothing on, I mean some people might not be offended when they see a couple of naked guys go at it, however I am sure most of us will. So get them some clothing.

2: Ryo should be a black Sangiyan, a dark skinned Tien. Like Popo is a black Genie, Ryu should be a black Sangiyan, cause that would be cool, I am just saying since this is DBZ based you should have some DBZ based races, like the Sangiyans.

3: Kash should be an ogre or oni or what ever you wanna consider them and have horns just like them aswell, you can keep with the same hair and face, just put some cloths on him and give him the horns that you see these beings having.

4: Kanon should look like a Shintenma, (Shintenma's are those creatures you will see in the Bojacks movie, movie #9, actually Bojacks is a shintenma, a demon closely related to elves and Kaioshin, cause of their ears, and the fact they have hair and are not reptiles or whatever the namekians are). So I would give Kanon long Orange hair like Bojacks or short like Bido.

Other than this and the fact you still need girls in any anime, unless you want people making gay comics and pictures about it, so do make some girls, cause I don't think you want some gayass making a yaio picture of Kanon and Ryo as a couple, cause thats what these guys do, I mean come on this one guy made a gay comic of Vegeta getting a blow job by Krillin. Think about it!!! Have some girls as major characters in the anime, yet keep the three still as the main factor.

Other than this your anime looks flawless, I know you wanna make it all or nearly all about action, but you need some progression, something to keep people minds' "straight".

AkiraToriyamaJR responds:

Sorry it took 2 years to respond.

1. Their dead and this is Newgrounds. If you saw the first fury i did they were sticks. Then i started to draw them out in the second version which is after the first version. They like people to be original. I didnt want to draw them out completly and say their dead because then that would be to much like dragon ball z. They will posse living souls until they find their bodys. That was part of it so consider these bodies their souls.

2. The only thing im really using from akira ( not dbz akira toriyama)is his style of artwork and animation. Some scenes i did borrow from dbz, but thats to get better adjusted and to come with some new ideas.

3. Kash is a demon, and a very powerful one. His history wasnt really put in the preview but he is the first to fight kanon in the movie. If you seen the ending of Maximum Chakra their is a guy with dark yellow eyes and a ponytail. Thats kash redone. Ive redon him the most and gave him a dark, deep history.

4. This is a villan like no other. Kanon will not smile, laugh, cry, or put effort for a power up. Ive remade him into a lifeless soul. There are some major twist ive added and you all will be surprised. I thank you for your advice and review, but for this movie, i got it under control. Their all still dead, kash being the only demon right now was granted some things other dead souls arent. Dragon Ball V though is something im making after Maximum Chakra so for that id like to hear more about your ideas and the races so i get it accurate. But leave Fury to me guys.

Good....except one thing

I don't like how everyone except Kash is bald. Do you think you could add some hair? Other than that, this is one of the best I've seen. IT looks like with the right materials, you could actually draw a cartoon pretty well. Not as good as Toriyama himself, but pretty close.

You Suck Balls!! DBZ knockoff bitch

I can't even believe you put that on here. Maybe next time introduce a style of your own instead of stealing everything from face animations to effects from DBZ. You should be banished to hellfor this.

AkiraToriyamaJR responds:

i cant believe your on here lol. this has been here for over a year.....where u been at. either ur a true jap-dbz fan or an american, i think i no everything about dbz, fan. doesnt really matter. i hear this "do ur own style" and blah blah. Cant you guys be happy ur seein people like u, ur own ages doing things people thought big companys could only do. sigh, ive been sighin alot after read the crap on here. god thats why ive been gone so long lol cuase of people like you. which delayed my movie FURY the full version. i did change alot on it but if u can appreciate watching someone who aint akira but can almost draw and animate like him,.....hmm fuck it. i guess ill find another site. this is troublesome to constantly explain myself. oh go to hell bitch....just to make it even