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[ComfortablyNumb]

Great Story. Great Animation.

You are a great story teller. Most flash movies that have in depth story I do not really get into. Yours got my attention right away. You are also a great artist. The animations was excellent, and I can see that you are truly a Toriyama fan. I do have some suggestions though. I would really like to see more shape in the face. I love the facial expressions. I too love to draw in Akira Toriyama style of DBZ. I mostly do facial expressions. I have a hard time with the face shape. I think you could do this very well. It would look so much better then that round shape. Please consider it. I would also suggest you add clothing and skin tone to the characters. I think that would add a real realitist quality to them. It would take more time to animate, however I think it would add a lot more visual appeal also. I can not wait to see the full version, and I hope it is released soon. Very Impressive.

AkiraToriyamaJR responds:

thanks alot. i have alotta facial expressions in the full movie. i didnt want to put to much of the movie in. i used the circles because they used to be stick figures and i changed that. i think im gonna submit my fist to movies so every 1 can see wat it looked like. when they get back into their bodys, im gonna change their style to typical anime. i was only usn the DBZ style for their dead stages

[l3raveheart]

something fresh & new...

You should really work on the hair...they really dont look right without them. Uh...lets see...other than that, the graphics were amazing. The music...is....shall i say annoying? but atmospheric. Nice intro, but hoping for some more in the real movie

AkiraToriyamaJR responds:

they wont have hair until they are back in a body. the music is from DBZ MOVIE 7 a remix and its goes good with the movie if you watch and listen to it closely. i didnt want to add so much into the preview because then their would be no point in watching part 1. and i dont no if im gonna finish the series, i might but i wont submit it

[Michael-Modest]

Nice Work

i'm a fan of DBZ, but some of the crap on NG flat out sucks. Especially when people just translate the cartoon into flash. whats the point?? I can just watch TV! But this doesn't suck. The graphics are sweet and even though the style is like DBZ you're still really talented. Just don't make any characters like the ones in the Dragon Ball series. Keep up the good work JR.

AkiraToriyamaJR responds:

Thanks Alot!!!! i really appreciate it. im using akira's style because i can draw with that style of drawing better. i no they look like dbz but their not. chrono's and dr slump look like dbz because it was done by akira. but thanks again

[Hadji-San]

good good good

i agree with mightydein, why is everyone bald besides the last dude? also, the them is like DBZ but not completly cuz of your story line. also at least you didnt make the guys power up for 20 minutes. thats the only thing thats wrong with dbz :P keep up the work on your cartoon, movie, thing.

AkiraToriyamaJR responds:

ryo and kanon are bald because der dead kash is a supreme demon which is why he has hair

[Mightydein]

Why is everyone blad?!

You've made a movie that's front page materal but i only have one question.

Why is everyone blad?

AkiraToriyamaJR responds:

THANKS ALOT!!! but to answer your question eryo and kanon ae dead. which is why their dead