constructive
You have your heart in the right place. Don't worry so much about the bad reviews. Just stick with it and you'll improve in time. Always keep a dictionary handy to proof read your work. Keep practicing on your graphics too. A background instead of a plain white back would be better as well. Another thing, would be to sit on your flash for a day or two so you you can get suggestions from family or friends on ways of improving it before you submit it to the portal. Good luck on the next one.