Good Job
Ok, it may not be a flash masterpiece but I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work man. But I didn't understand why the Rhode Island night club fire was compared to the WTC attacks. The night club fire was a terrible accident, no one intended to start the fire and kill all those people.
Pretty good.
A few spelling mistakes here and there, but not bad. I think people should stop drinking so much Hatorade.
Bad animation ...good message
I totally agree with what you say in this movie thats why i'll vote a 4.Dont listen to people
that tell you that ur saying hippy crap, they just still don't understand and they are jealous because we do.
thanks
constructive
You have your heart in the right place. Don't worry so much about the bad reviews. Just stick with it and you'll improve in time. Always keep a dictionary handy to proof read your work. Keep practicing on your graphics too. A background instead of a plain white back would be better as well. Another thing, would be to sit on your flash for a day or two so you you can get suggestions from family or friends on ways of improving it before you submit it to the portal. Good luck on the next one.
it was nice
i realy liked it. but seeing as this is a review, ya shoulda spent more time on the graphics.