Well..
BAH PRESET SNARE!!!
Lol, Jk, jk, really. The snare is OK, but it really doesn't fit the actual feeling of the track. It is too loud, too sudden, too harsh. Get something softer.
WAHHHH!!! You need better transitions! That synth just comes in! There is no build, no real transition, just a switch.
Well, good song! Keep up the work!