Oh what is this??????
Inspired by a dance musician I see. :) When you transition into that happy stuff (your 2nd transition) that tune sounds very very familiar. Hey I actually reviewed the guy that had the exact same rhythm as you did. "A New Beginning (Full Version)" by aaron4400. Take a listen. He got blammed though which was really too bad so I hope the same doesn't happen to you cause its a cool rhythm. Like the past reviewers said, you need better transitions, but it ain't so bad. Add a fx and its all fixed. :) I'll 5/5 your song and since I like the trance section too...not as much as dance...I'll give you a 8/10 review. Keep them music stuff coming. (excuse my bad english)