(Hopefully) constructive criticism
I want to start by mentioning what I like about this series. The story, while difficult to understand at times (mostly due to poor sound quality I think, I can't blame you for that with the budget you've got for this thing) is interesting. I like the story, even though it does seem reminiscent of Highlander at times. That's mostly the secret information society thing. Kinda Anne Ricey too now that I think of it(sorry).
But coming up with an original story that happens to be a lot like other stories is something I can identify and sympathize with. Even borrowing stuff along the way. But the thing is I admit I do it. You folks have stated previously that you aren't borrowing from Blade or D but - Viv rides a unicycle very similar to one in D:Blooodlust, and she also uses tools and a sword which are very reminiscent of Blade. There's no crime in it, but you should at least admit where your inspiration comes from.
Even if you came up with something (like the cycle for instance) before ever seeing it somewhere else, it would help your credibility tremendously to mention the similiarity just to get it out in the open. That way the viewer doesn't feel like you're trying to pull one over on them.
Mostly though, and I am really sorry this turned out so long, the presentation seems...contrived. I really hate to say this, because it's a shame when a cool style gets done to death by the Film and T.V. industries, but nevertheless - the presentation of the action scenes has an overly Matrix-ish feel in my opinion. There's good dialogue and good gore, creative kill/death scenes (if a little monochromatic in the mood department, but that's a personal taste thing). So I hate to see it nearly wasted with a tired delivery.
If you actually bothered to read this whole thing and want to respond (say, to give me an earful about how wrong I am) here's my e-mail: [earthan@catholic.org] I'm not catholic, it's just free e-mail.
