the stock FL snare sounds pretty bad, try cutting off the mid sounds. a lot of this is low quality, like the sound design is halfway unfinished. the pianos need changing. the basses are pretty hollow.
basically the concept is good but the way it was made could be better.
Dude I get that you like Theory of Everything, but you need to stop, well, whoring its name out. This song, honestly isn't that good sorry. I think it'd be better if you just made your own works, instead of fanmades of existing songs. I've heard some of your original songs, and they're better than both of your ToE fanmades.
Nice job! I already wrote a toe 4 but it's rushed and probably the worst thing that would ever come to your ears. But I'm going write a toe 5... It will be 1,000,000 better than my toe 4. But you did a good job!
Please stop making these fanmades, man. They're really annoying. Why don't you people just wait for dj-Nate to make it himself? NO STARS