Cool piano I guess?
I hear a ton of clipping on this drum rise...
This drop isn't bad, the sounds need a low cut on the stereo
This supersaw could be detuned a bit less.
Maybe change the bass... you're using the same exact wobble throughout the entirety of the drop and it can get a bit annoying.
Add some more stuff to this riser other than just a kick drum, like a white noise riser and a pitch riser
This is very repetitive... xD
Overall 3/5. Theres quite a bit you could fix :) sorry if this seems harsh.
~Z