nice job
i like stuff like this :D you've made a pretty cool job om it pal, hope to see part 2 soon
Reviews for "Mafia: Franky Goes Miami"
Not too good...
Sorry, but it really wasn't that good. They animations was quite poor...mostly 3 movement limbs which looks crappy. Although, some small parts were better than others...seemed like some parts you hardy tried on while other parts you did. Try being more consistant. Also, the text moving really sucked...if you are making people read a lot they don't wanna have to follow it across the screen (cut back on the long talking too...it is boring). Try adding voices. Don't do any of that Motion Tweening scrolling by an open mouth or anything like that, it is just pointless. Guessing you trying the dramatic affect...but it ain't working. You didn't have any dramatic sound to go with. Not that great of a story plot either... I guess it is good for a beginner.
Bachine responds:
Hey, you know how hard it is to make a good flash? The time it takes? I suggest you go watch "A tribute to animators". Guys, I'm only a beginner. This is my third movie. To me, I think I have improved dramatically. Just watch my other movies, their way worse than this one. I think this movie is good and alot better than the stuff we get in the portal usually. Try to be open minded that Im a beginner.
Sucks My Balls
This movie sucks by big thick cock, and then juggles my balls in it's mouth. Eat my asshole shitface.
kool
very kool!
Heyyy, not too shabby.
I liked tha animation. The sound is awesome. I love that music. Only think I suggest is that you stop moving the text when it's displayed, it's kind of annoying. Also, have the guy talk once in awhile, unless your going for the silent protagonist thing. Hope to see part 2 soon.