in assition to the last reviewers comments...
aswell as the bakinis,the cars,and the ten million dollars,the mafia wasnt doing buisness in crack and coke! it was all about the booze in the fifties,prohibition.youve made a modern day mob flick and it just doesnt work right.try harder next time,capeche?
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I agree with the other poster about this. I mean first of why in 1952 would a hitman be offered 10 million dollars to kill someone. Make know since. Then you had people driving cars which did not look like that in the 50s. Try drawing something that looks like a pt crusier. Next you had women in string bikinis.....not in the 50s. 2 piece bathing suits would have been to taboo for 52'. Next time sit down and actually right out the details to your next cartoon with someone over the age of 20 who might no something of the past.
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the guy that reviewed this movie was just seeking attention...trying to sound like he knows everything...HA! i think your movie was awesome, you had a different style of drawing in every scene...and that is a style in itself, which i really liked. keep up the excellent work.
this is SO CLOSE to being good...
daniel, i don't mean to be discouraging, but unfortunately, you're just another example of a newgrounds artist who spends hours drawing, and minutes thinking. for example, in 1952, NO ONE payed $10,000,000 for ANYTHING. that kind of money was unheard of in 1952. i payoff of $100,000 would be more understandable. also, a dirty, unshaven 'franky' is picked up off the side of the road on past references and offered ten million dollars just like THAT? like most newgrounds artists, your time would be better spent actually RESEARCHING the mafia of the 1950's, because it was very different from what it is today... additionally, for the plot... where does franky come from? its a little bit boring to watch just another character without a personality shoot guns on newgrounds. however, i can't be all negative. you DID work very hard on the animation, and that much is evident. i've tried to use flash before, and your skills far outweigh mine. for a beginner, you're excellent, so keep improving. just make sure that you stop falling into the pitfall that most artists on newgrounds fall into... drawing without thinking.. but good work, i will definitely be looking for part two. you've established yourself well.
is this the 50's?
In 1954, America didnt know what cocaine was, airports were vvveeerrrryy limited and half of those weapons didnt exist! its a good movie, but it shoula taken place in the late 80s or 90s.