Good
But you need to put more detail into it. And a loading screen would be nice. Practice how to make the blood look better to. It was good for a first try though.
Reviews for "FANTASTIC shootout =)"
BazzMann responds:
positive feedback, sensible ratings, well-written review! Thanks man, see you symbolise the people that I make flash movies for! Im gonna try a whole lot harder after all these great reviews! But didnt you think the active streaming was pitched right? I tried everything in my power to avoid the dreaded 'getBytesLoaded' Loadscreen... maybe it should have a play button, or maybe ill just make a loadscreen...
everybody in this movie need practice!
It was a "nice" movie but! damm! these guys r really bad aiming! except 4 da sissy who shot in the back of that lonely cop!
BazzMann responds:
Good review, except yet again someone has overlooked the violence rating... this doesnt deserve a 10! it only has one part with blood! but thanks mate, and youre the first that has made a comment about the content, and not just the design, whether or not it is a good or a bad thing, well done!
I wouldn't say Fantastic
It was pretty good, I've seen better but it looks like you put a lot of work into this.
I would like to see a sequel
BazzMann responds:
Thanks, wow! About 80% of the reviewers here are seriously smart and considerate! Or maybe this is a good movie... which it is, of course =)! Thanks again, but AGAIN, AGAIN WITH THE GODDAMN 10 FOR VIOLENCE! THERE IS NO VIOLENCE!!!!! NONE WHATSOEVER!!! EXCEPT 1 COP GETTING SHOT! But otherwise, thanks a lot mate!
I liked it!
The animation doesnt always have to be perfect, its a fun little movie and ive seen a hell of a lot worse!
BazzMann responds:
Very wise words, thanks a lot! But again, again, again with the 10 for violence!! Not nessisary (long story... look at all other reviews for explanation!) Well, even though your review is true, I still think my graphics can do with a bit more work, but it is a damn good movie for a first submission, if i do say so myself! :P
Well, since it's your first...
I gave you a 2. I can tell that it took a lot of time and effort and it's a damn fine first run. However, you broke quite a few rules of newgrounds etiquette with the film. First, no story just guns. Not always a bad thing but your graphics aren't at place !YET! where they can hold up an animation on their own. Next, the Matrix thing - personally, I think the whole slow motion thing is overplayed and used too much anyway, but then you pull out the old Matrix bullet dodge and my hand suddenly takes over and wants to click 0. I will say, that I'm sure this took quite a long time and I'm glad that you learned as much about motion tweening and sound events as you did before you threw in your first submission. All said, it was good. Not worth more than a 2, but it was good. A little more effort toward the graphics and the addition of a plot, you'll be there.
BazzMann responds:
Cheers mate, granted you gave me a '2' on the vote, and '3' on the review, but at least you THOUGHT before you wrote it! Thank god, there are some intelligable Newgrounds reviewers out there... and I appreciate the critisism... I will work on making a kickass brand new movie later this month... over my lonely xmas ;)