Pacing a little off. Like maybe there's too much time between the things being said/done? Voice acting and animation are on point though. Looks like a lot of effort was put in.
Pacing a little off. Like maybe there's too much time between the things being said/done? Voice acting and animation are on point though. Looks like a lot of effort was put in.
Quality animation! Great work!
Amazing stuff! The character design is REALLY good, I like the fluid animation too.
Maybe the script could use some better pacing, a lot of downtime between delivering meaningful parts of the story and I find that's very dangerous for a pilot.
Besides that, I feel Gramps voice lines have a bit of distortion on them? Not sure if I'm tripping on that. Either way, keep up!
The animation looks pretty good, ant the style is ok, I like ti!
The animation and style is absolutely perfect. I feel like i'm watching a cartoon from CN and this has that potential. Would love for more of these.