A little stilted
Certain sections sounded a little too plodding or stilted, which is probably due mostly to the inability of synthesizers to be human... oh well. The piano is a little too steady in its patterns, which I think may cause some of what I was talking about. Also, the pitch set, string scoring, and modulation pattern sounds very similar to Our Love Forever, which I happened to listen to before this one. Obviously this was written first, so that particular comment belongs in the other one, but... oh well. Anyway, pretty darn good.