Great Piece, Drums too strong
I absolutely LOVE the melody of this piece! I think it's great!!
...Until the drums come in...They offer a strong focal point in the piece, but it over-rides the tender melody I think. It's like a giant mecha is stomping through a meadow if you will.
I think you should submit this piece again with either less emphasis on the drums or remove the drums all together.
...Each time I listen to this though, it get's better and better...Great job!!