Not bad!
This has potential man! You've got an alright plot to work on, kinda like the Fugitive. Keep the voices, though you might want to put more .. emotion into them, they're not fitting exactly - but any voice is better than only subtitles I can't stand them, and I always want to give higher scores to those with thier own dialouge, they put more ass into it.
Different music would be good, though if not - this is better than nothing.
You've done a lot of work on shading, within the eyes and on the face due to his hair etc, which is pretty good, his first jump was very well done - I like the way you've improvised and worked well with images as background.
A bit more realism in movement in the next one would make this series amazing, so far it is looking quite good, keep it up!