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Reviews for "Lonesoul - Episode 1 - SE"

I'm a bit harsh on reviewing but...

First off, I want you to understand that I really like this. I think this is very very good, but I tend to give lower scores than necessary because I know some day that the messiah of flashes will appear and I want that flash to recieve my only ever perfect score. Anyway, I like your art. Your animation was good and I know it will only get better. Your hero's voice was a little... unenthusiastic. I assume that's your real voice so I know this is asking a lot, but I think it would benefit from possibly OVER-acting the voice part. The humor was... Like Spider-man on a bad day. Wasn't really funny, just kind of sarcastic. Too many jokes like that tend to make the viewer root for the bad guy... Please take this as constructive criticism. I'm not saying your flash is bad, quite the opposite. I think this is really good. I'm just telling you what I think would improve it. Take it or leave it. Nice work overall though man!

the music drove me nuts!!

aaaaahhh!! i just cant get over the repetitive music!! it made me want to destroy my comp, but i stuck with it all the way to the end. overall, i think it has a halfway decent story, kinda cheesy ( thus your style ) aaaaannd you get a 6!! sorry but honesty is what counts right?
keep up the uh...work.

adam-p89 responds:

ok..

Remember, Svorlbrad's word is law...

I don't like it...much

I'm sorry -_-

Urk, I never like write 'bad' reviews. Let's just cause this a negative review.

The animation is choppy, not very smooth. It's hard to draw anime in Flash, but this could have been better.

Fighting sequences were too slow/boring.

Voice for Lonesoul is fine, the soldiers' ones need work.

I think you should just cut out the words, makes it look cleaner.

WHAT..THE..HELL..IS..GENRYU'S BLADE?

http://www.shockanime.com/film s/originals/gblade/

adam-p89 responds:

OHH! That is genryu's blade! I made this movie months before I saw genryu's blade. (just watched it now) That movie is amazing, but this wasn't intended to be a copy of it. (seeing as I didnt even know of it's existance until long after making this)