Dude, your song is literally RIGHT in between two of mine on the recently posted list.
Reviews for "-Toil-"
Waterflame responds:
So it is.
Now THIS is the Waterflame I love! I love the instruments used for this, i just love the vibes that this song has. Really Good, one of my favorite from you!
Keep being awesome,
-BitPower
Waterflame responds:
Glad to hear that :D I was very positively surprised to see people actually missed this more industrial-like style. Thank you!
This is a very catchy track with a lot of engaging content throughout. I also enjoyed the vocal samples. I think it was very bass-heavy overall, so much so that the more melodic riffs get drowned out at times, like at 2:11. I also think the drums could've been mastered a lot louder. Perhaps the ending could've been more climactic or interesting. It's well-structured and smooth-flowing nevertheless. I like the filtering and distortion at around 4:10 and, despite being a little long, the piece maintains my attention throughout. Keep at it, Waterflame. ;)
Waterflame responds:
Thank you for the constructive feedback and nice words! I kind of wanted to hear something like this. The mix was the one thing that made me a bit skeptic about calling this song done.
And I can hear that you are def. right about that. I could have cut into the bass a bit and made some more room for the drums.
As far as the ending goes tho, I like it like this. I felt the song is climactic and intense almost throughout the track, so the ending is more like a wind-down.
wow, this is great! I love it!
Waterflame responds:
Thank you
Nice! love the vibe with the first instrument.
the atmosphere at around :39 is really nice, and the complexity is great.
only problem is 1:23's vocals sound out of place and the reverb effect makes me uncomfortable.
Waterflame responds:
Thank you! Noted, but I think the reverb effect is more of a preference thing. I thought it sounded kinda like a recording, and it was appealing to me. But I can see what you mean, It does break the space a little bit.