this is amazing, everytime I listen to your songs they make me feel like a lazy piece of shit musician, keep it up man! :D 5/5
I gotta take more time on my songs, how long do you work on your songs? (like this one for instance)
Reviews for "-Toil-"
I like the beginning it's so ambient... just waiting for something to happen! :O
Nice job with the drums.
totally fits in the industrial theme you were going for! It's really catchy :D
Everything seems to be EQ'd perfectly, everything sits well in the mix.
I like what you did with the basses and vocal chops.
Not sure what the vocals are saying but lol not sure if they are even supposed to say anything XD
Those vocals really add to the feel of the song, nice job.
It seems a bit repetitive, but if you're going for a video game song then thats good.
Yeah I wouldn't really listen to this on a daily basis, but I'm sure a lot of people would!!
Oooo.... this part is spooky!!
Reminds me of some 80's movie for some reason xD
You did a good job with the style... these vocal chops are really good. And good for you for trying something different, this turned out really well! I hope you use my criticism constructively :)
-Z
*See's new song by waterflame*
*immedi8ly downloads*
:o the "lyrics" are the unique classic i expected you to include. Awesome song dude
not bad but the beginning sound like, i cant explain it but sounds bad, and i don't see this as video game i see it as industrial but i don't think you have any control over that so only half a star off.
I Like this song / good job WF