I'm a real sucker for this 80's, retro, synth-pop, post-modern style... It screams Stranger Things vibe.. and is getting at something kind of abstract and familiar at the same time. The animation is a tad crude but that honestly may have been a conscious decision. Either way, I like it! Good work.
Reviews for "A girl you cant see"
The song you chose for this worked with the animation wonderfully, it really nailed that retro feel. Well done!
Wonderful. Just a wonderful little thing with fluid animation and a lovely story of why most artists create art, well done.
The backgrounds and colours are incredible. The animation was hit and miss, I think you would benefit from practicing life drawing and character poses. Overall it was a nice little short and you have room to grow.
DeadFlyFromMoon responds:
Yeah I totaly agree with animation. It is hit and miss. Sometimes I feel lucky when I the animation is done right.
that was boring. the girl is boring. she has imagination and such but she has no sense of action. there was pretty colors here and there, but the whole thing did nothing emotionally for me.
i know how hard you worked, and i know its a struggle to make cartoons, but damn make them visually funny or interesting or scary or psychologically moving please.
try and say something with your work.