this is alright
I gave you a "7" because you wrote a poem and had a decent story going. It is good to do flash related to history (the school shootings), and this was done in a different style...mainly black and white...not just about bloody gore. How shall I describe it, hmm, maybe "poetic". Nice work. Oh, I liked the music, it's called "Sweet Dreams", by the Eurythmics....didn't see it credited there. I liked the ending where the blood drips down.
Very well done.
I really enjoyed this "short". The type of animation was very effective and the choice of music was excellent.
I really would love to see a few other serious "shorts" come from you, Aaron..
Umm...Okay
That song in the backround take me to the good old days. Oh Well
I feel like killin someone now
but I don't got a gun.
hm. I think my uncle got a gun, a 9mm Luger.
Very Nice
This was good, if you would have written the poem yourself I probably would have given a higher score..
Other than that, I appreciate gritty graphics when it comes to times like this, but yours needed some fine tuning. A sharper, crisper drawing style would have worked better... at least I think so.
Other than that, nice job!