THROUGHLY ENJOYED IT!!
Although I do think you could have told more story with less voice overs
Reviews for "The Finger Eater - Chapter 1"
Wow that was really awesome and creepy Thank you for this :,)
I don't often write reviews, but this piece deserved every bit of praise i could give. Spot On.
Well done! Wow. The story captivated me. What was going to happen next? It kept me wondering. The face behind the mysterious monster.. I was kept guessing. The sound affects and graphics were well selected and well placed, I mean you did a REALLY good job!
This was great! It seems like you really wanted us to get into the Halloween spirit! I appreciate how awesome the animation is. I just keep mistaking Piper for Rina-chan. I guess the latter just isn't that active here nowadays. There was one problem.
What was the revenge the other guy wanted? There seemed no reason. I can always associate with bullies. Most of us in high school were in this situation. I didn't even know there were three voices in this!
TheFabs responds:
Why he wanted revenge will be explored in the next part. Maybe Ruby wasn't as innocent and helpless as she seemed before the deal with 79.