Knowing what I do of animation and storycraft in general, and considering the work you did, this is great for a month. It's frankly great as a first submission. Could you improve it? Sure, but you show real promise. You will get better... but you're definitely on a good start.
Reviews for "Creation"
BitterBrushAnimation responds:
thank you so much! ^w^" everyone has been very encouraging to me! i will get better or die trying! XD
T'was good. But I'm a little thrown off by the low framerate
BitterBrushAnimation responds:
^~^" yeah the frame rate was cut in half. it is rendered at 12 frames per second. frankly unacceptable for computer animation. but considering i only had a month to work on it i had to cut corners somewhere....and it still took like 3 days to render (it would have taken 6 days to render at 24 FPS which was time i didn't have near the end.).. but most people barely noticed. no one in the class even mentioned it. they mostly pointed to the poor pacing in it. which i would argue is a bigger flaw embedded in the foundation of the film that i really should have ironed out more ^.^' but like i said i was on a time limit (in edition to being inexperienced with story telling.). but in the future this time limit wont be in place so any errors will be solely on my lack of skill. ^.^ thank you so much for your time and feedback! have a wonderful day.
Great animation! The sound wasn't up to the same standard though unfortunately :)
BitterBrushAnimation responds:
lol my second time ever working with sound ^.^" probably should look up some sound design tutorials. thanks for your feed back! ^.^
Technically clunky in places, but visually interesting and I thought the story worked quite well. Congrats!
BitterBrushAnimation responds:
i agree it is very clunky in places. but i just wanted to actually finish an animation for once. so even though i wasn't completely happy with the animation i had to pass it and move on because i only had a month to work on it. iam more proud that i finished a project for once. rather then how it turned out. i can and will do better then this in the future :P
The framerate on the video was a bit clunky. The story was ok. I liked the animation style.
BitterBrushAnimation responds:
yes it is, :P as stated before the frame rate was cut in half to save time on rendering. since the project was due in one month and i already wasn't able to incorporate every idea i wanted to i had to cut corners some where.