i dont know if you got this ideea from Highschool OF the Dead but it sure looks simple and interactive but you could always improve for instance you can try adding some more movement scenes and insted of reading the things you can try bit of voice acting you did a great job but i think you can do better
Reviews for "Dead Detention #1"
A pretty good "game", though I think to make it better, you should work on adding branching paths. I'm not saying "The Walking Dead" style gameplay, but adding some choice to the game would make it even better. Even maybe add a bit of challenge to the minigames, like timers, to help give the player a bit of satisfaction for completing a minigame.
I do also like the simplicity of the art style, but there were a few parts were I wasn't sure what was what. Look at what you could improve, be ambitious but practical, and I think you'll be able to do cool things with this series.
we really need a sequel or we will turning into angry zombies. cool i like ow naomi looks .
JackAstral responds:
Ahaha thanks! I'll definitely make episode 2 sometime in December!
i like the music and the art style, though the teacher's design seemed a bit sloppy. and maybe make it sort of like a 'choose-your-own-adventure' game in the next one? i'll definitely be playing it, this is the start of a great series.
JackAstral responds:
Thanks dude!
its a fun game, but, i think need a bit more colors, also, how about some turns and ends?
decisions to make who realy afects the game play
nevertheless, nice game :D
JackAstral responds:
Thanks! I might try adding branches in episode 2!