~ Mild Spoilers for the begining! ~
Even upon downloading, the game becomes entirely unplayable for me after the guy gets shot in the begining. I tried reloading the page several times, and downloading the game didn't help. I'm not sure why it keeps happening, but I thought you may want to know. Your other VN's are really good, so I'm certainly sad I don't get to see this one. I hope you continue making them, they're always worth checking out!
I hope this porblem gets resolved after a while, I'd really love to play the game.